Reformulated a few things in the readme

README.md

@@ -9,16 +9,17 @@ on.
 
 [I2Pd](https://i2pd.website/) is packaged in
 [OpenBSD](https://www.openbsd.org/)'s official repositories, but the provided
-versions are old, and older versions don't always run reliably when interacting
-with newer versions on the I2P network.
+versions are usually old, and older versions don't always run reliably when
+interacting with newer versions on the I2P network.
 
 Fortunately, compiling the latest version from source on OpenBSD is painless.
 LibreSSL is supported, the official instructions work out of the box, and only a
 small manual intervention is required to make the daemon start at system boot.
 
 This repository contains instructions on how to compile I2Pd on OpenBSD together
-with a makefile and an RC script to make it a system service, which allows it
-to be started at boot, restarted if it crashes, managed by `rcctl`, and more.
+with a makefile and an RC script to make it a system service. This allows it
+to be started at boot, to be managed by `rcctl`, to be restarted if it crashes,
+etc.
 
 
 ## Compiling and installing
@@ -32,8 +33,8 @@ stated here.
 
 First, install
 [a few dependencies](https://i2pd.readthedocs.io/en/latest/devs/building/requirements/).
-Git is not in their list, but is needed as it does not come with OpenBSD's base
-system:
+Git is not listed as a dependency in the official build documentation, but it is
+needed as it does not come with OpenBSD's base system:
 
     $ doas pkg_add boost cmake git lzlib
 
@@ -42,7 +43,7 @@ Next, clone their git repository:
     $ cd /a/folder/of/your/choice/where/to/clone/the/repo
     $ git clone https://github.com/PurpleI2P/i2pd.git
 
-Then, generate the makefile and compile the source. You can
+Then, generate the makefile and compile the source. You can also
 [pass options to cmake](https://i2pd.readthedocs.io/en/latest/devs/building/unix/#cmake-options)
 to customize your makefile:
 
@@ -87,29 +88,31 @@ end of `/etc/login.conf` to create the login class:
 
 If you are using OpenBSD 7.1 or newer, a login class can be created by adding a
 file in `/etc/login.conf.d`. The makefile ran in the next steps detects the
-version and creates the file automatically.
+version and creates the file automatically if the version is 7.1 or newer.
 
-The new login class will be used by the user `_i2pd` created in the following
-steps. Next, clone this git repository:
+This new login class will be used by the user `_i2pd` created in the following
+steps.
+
+Next, clone this git repository:
 
     $ cd /a/folder/of/your/choice/where/to/clone/the/repo
     $ git clone https://gitlab.com/alpou/i2pd-rc-openbsd.git
 
-Then, simply run the makefile. This step creates a dedicated `_i2pd` user and a
-group of the same name if they don't already exist, creates the login class
-described above if you are using OpenBSD 7.1 or newer, makes the binaries
-previously compiled belong to them, and copies the init script in `/etc/rc.d`.
+Then, simply run the makefile. This will create a dedicated user and group to run
+I2Pd, both called `_i2pd`, and give them ownership of the binaries compiled
+previously. The login class described above will also be created if you are using
+OpenBSD 7.1 or newer, and the init script will be copied in `/etc/rc.d`.
 
     $ cd i2pd-rc-openbsd
     $ doas make install
 
-The final step is to enable the service to make it start at boot time and to
+The final step is to enable the service to make it start at boot time and then to
 manually start it:
 
     $ doas rcctl enable i2pd
     $ doas rcctl start i2pd
 
-Enjoy!
+You're done. Enjoy!
 
 
 ## Licensing