Minor readme changes

README.md

@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ The only things left are (1) streaming, and (2) letting other people
 access your stream.  [/STREAMING.md][streaming] has instructions for
 setting up OBS Studio and a Tor onion service.  If you want to use
 different streaming software and put your stream on the Internet some
-other way, still read those instructions and copy the gist.
+other way, read those instructions and copy the gist.
 
 ## Copying
 

STREAMING.md

@@ -11,22 +11,21 @@ On Windows it might be somewhere in `%appdata%\tor` or something.
 
 A Tor hidden service is a regular TCP service that you talk to via a
 6-hop circuit created inside the Tor network.  You initiate the creation
-of this circuit by providing tor with the service's hostname, which is a
+of this circuit by providing tor with the service's hostname, a long
-long base32-encoded string ending in ".onion".  This hostname is derived
+base32-encoded string ending in ".onion".  This hostname is derived from
-from a pair of cryptographic keys generated by the hidden service
+a pair of cryptographic keys generated by the hidden service operator.
-operator.
 
 A TCP service is a computer program you interact with over the Internet
 using TCP.  TCP is a low-level networking protocol that sits above IP
-and creates a reliable so-called "connection" between two computers.  It
+and creates a reliable "connection" between two computers.  It handles
-handles the reordering and resending of packets that are shuffled or
+the reordering and resending of packets that are shuffled or lost in
-lost in transit on the Internet, such that the bytes sent from one
+transit on the Internet, such that the bytes sent from one computer will
-computer will match exactly the bytes that arrive at the other computer
+match exactly the bytes that arrive at the other (barring active
-(barring active interference (MITM), TCP is not secure).  Getting
+interference (MITM), TCP is not secure).  Getting reliability for free
-reliability for free greatly simplifies the creation of network
+greatly simplifies the creation of network applications, and for this
-applications, and for this reason and other historical reasons TCP is
+reason and other historical reasons TCP is ubiquitous on the Internet to
-ubiquitous on the Internet to this day.  Many applications use TCP, for
+this day.  Many applications use TCP, for example IRC, SSH, RTMP,
-example IRC, SSH, RTMP, Minecraft, and HTTP (like us here).
+Minecraft, and HTTP (like us here).
 
 #### Configuration
 
@@ -80,7 +79,7 @@ other user.  There may be a `User` directive in your torrc or in a file
 included by your torrc, for example on Debian it's `User debian-tor`.
 This means that a tor process running as root will immediately drop
 privileges by switching to the user `debian-tor`. The user's primary
-group should have the same name, but you can check as root like this:
+group should have the same name, check like this as root:
 `# id debian-tor`.
 
 On Linux, if tor is already running you can see what user and group it is
@@ -113,9 +112,9 @@ Include this line verbatim directly below the `HiddenServiceDir` line:
 HiddenServicePort 80 127.0.0.1:5051
 ```
 
-tor will listen for connections to our onion address at virtual port
+tor will listen for connections to our onion address at virtual port 80
-80 (this is the conventional HTTP port), and it will forward that
+(the conventional HTTP port), and it will forward traffic to the TCP
-traffic to our TCP service at 127.0.0.1:5051, which is our webserver.
+service at 127.0.0.1:5051, which is our webserver.
 
 ##### Finish
 
@@ -184,6 +183,9 @@ Click `Settings` and set these:
     +----------------------------+-------------------------------------+
     ```
 
+> *If this table looks garbled, read this file as plaintext or [click
+> here][plaintext] and scroll to the bottom.*
+
 To start streaming click `Start Recording`.
 
 When it is recording, segments older than four minutes will be regularly
@@ -197,3 +199,4 @@ over the network even if they are not deleted.
 [tor]: https://gitlab.torproject.org/tpo/core/tor
 [torrc]: https://support.torproject.org/#tbb-editing-torrc
 [ffmpeg]: https://trac.ffmpeg.org/wiki/HWAccelIntro
+[plaintext]: https://git.076.ne.jp/ninya9k/anonstream/raw/branch/master/STREAMING.md