From 2cfd788bfb740b014ad43139ade40fcd8c6ac774 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Gran Noll Date: Mon, 27 Feb 2023 00:31:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] fali: fix grammar and typos, improve wording * "but then end up" -> "yet ending up" Earlier part was written as "claiming to be", so the logical outcome would be "ending up" instead of "end up". "but then" is replaced with "yet" to make the text less repetitive with "then". * "But then" -> "After that" Make "then" less redundant. * "libtertarian" -> "libertarian" Clearly a typo. * "if their claims actually match reality or not" -> "whether their claims actually match reality" Paraphrasing, nothing serious here. --- src/fali/index.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/fali/index.md b/src/fali/index.md index a7a03b5..a13ae01 100644 --- a/src/fali/index.md +++ b/src/fali/index.md @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ title: Fake Anarchist/Libertarian Instance Database ---- -Originally I made this list of Fediverse instances claiming to be anarchist and/or libertarian, but then end up being communist and/or authoritarian instead.\ +Originally I made this list of Fediverse instances claiming to be anarchist and/or libertarian, yet ending up being communist and/or authoritarian instead.\ Then I started adding heavily censorious "free speech" instances as well.\ -But then I started adding instances that are maybe truly free speech with red flags, and instances that are truly free speech, anarchist, and/or libtertarian, but don't claim to be as such.\ -So now this is a one stop Fedi instance review area to check if their claims actually match reality or not, though I've left the original name unchanged until I figure out an acronym using the same letters. +After that I started adding instances that are *maybe* truly free speech with red flags, and instances that are truly free speech, anarchist, and/or libertarian, but don't claim to be as such.\ +So now this is a one stop Fedi instance review area to see whether their claims actually match reality, though I've left the original name unchanged until I figure out an acronym using the same letters. I break their TOS, COCk, and/or about pages down so you don't have to.