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Gran Noll cb2baf9e94 contact: fix typos; improve wording and formatting
* "disgarded" -> "discarded"

Possibly a typo.

* "Any spam is subject to niggerlisting." ->
  "Any spam is subjected to niggerlisting."

It would be easy to just append an article before "subject", but I am
not sure whether "spam" is countable without a noun (like "spam
correspondence").

* "Any such complains shall [...]" -> "Such complaints shall [...]"

"Complains" is a verb. Use "complaints" for noun instead.

"Any" is omitted for the sake of getting this word less repetitive.

* "If any such complains arrive in my mailbox" -> "If any of them
  arrive into my mailbox"

"If any such complain[t]s" duplicates the previous sentence, use some
"creativity" to make it short; like: "If any of them".

I have seen the practice of putting things INTO something, and I
suspect this somehow does apply to mailboxes even if the one in this
context is not physical.

* "I'll forward them straight into a black hole" ->
  "I'll move them straight into a black hole"

I believe the point of this part was to let the potential harmbinger
know that the earlier listed types of correspondence will be deleted
without second thought.

"Forwarding" email does not necessarily imply it is "obliterated" by
said "black hole" as the recipient may still have a copy left.

* "Any death threads shall [...]" -> "Any death threats shall [...]"

I suspect this was a typo.

* "Every other form of death threads [...]" ->
  "Every other form of the death threat [...]"

See the last commentary.

When "Every other form" is used, the applied subject is used as a
singular noun (I think?).
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